Article proposes a critique of a policy or practice with specific action proposals or suggestions.
Article follows conventions of academic research article e.g. position in literature, cited sources, and claimed contribution.
Article is based on developments that have not yet occurred.
Article is based on formal logic or mathematical technique.
Language quality: 2/2*
Standard of English expression in article is excellent.
Scope of debate: 1.5/2
Article addresses an issue which is widely known and debated.
Most related sources are mentioned in article [this is an invitation to careful selection rather than a demonstration of prowess in citation collection i.e. apt and representative choices made in source citations].
Logical flow: 2/2*
Ideas are well organised in article.
The argument presented in article is new.
Review impact: 2/2
The article has been significantly changed as a result of the review process.
Reviewers indicate their appreciation of the article in the form of a 50 word statement.
A review of the expectations and plans for a mesh network from the perspective of its creators. Explores some paradoxes of expectation and reality in relation to privacy and security, as well as the persistence of visions of distributed internet alternatives. Policy and practice recommendations are provided in the conclusion.
A qualitative study of a Montreal-based mesh network, positioned in the socio-political context as an alternative to commercial internet provision. The authors, themselves participants, report on their peers’ goals and the challenges faced by the initiative. The article has been significantly revised since the initial version.