The Journal of Peer Production - New perspectives on the implications of peer production for social change New perspectives on the implications of peer production for social change
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Review A

Reviewer: Maurizio Teli

1. Is the subject matter relevant?

Yes. The described case, Sesamath, and its evolution from a completely voluntary based project to a project with a commercial component is extremely interesting. The domain of application of peer production, the textbooks for math, is also extremely significant, as it investigates the transformations in peer production of content different from software.

2. Is the treatment of the subject matter intellectually interesting? Are there citations or bodies of literature you think are essential to which the author has not referred?

Unfortunately, the very interesting case does not correspond to a good paper. In particular, both the theoretical part and the discussion of the empirical results are particularly weak. The authors claim that their theoretical framework is based on the sociology of work but they are mainly working to contrast some results in economics, symbolized by the contribution of Lerner and Tirole. This choice is questionable, as other papers, like Lakhani and Wolf 2003, have discussed the career building argument in wider lenses, expanding on the motivations for contribution starting with similar individualistic approaches. Moreover, it seems that the other four theoretical approaches presented in the theoretical part disappear all along the paper. Finally, the authors seem to be unaware of recent contribution, published also in the Journal of Peer Production, on the relationship between open source production, commercial attitudes, and the transformation of the institutional settings. Two notable missing works are De Paoli et al., JOPP 1, and Murillo et al., JOPP 3. Therefore, the theoretical part needs to be thickened and framed more widely, affecting also the discussion.

3. Are there any noticeable problems with the author’s means of validating assumptions or making judgments?

The problems with theory reflect on the way the authors validate assumptions. Indeed, the authors do not explicit what is their research question. Moreover, the methodological explanations are underdeveloped, with a reference to the conduction of an ethnographic case study without any further details (how long has the case been studied, what kind of data have been collected, how they have been analyzed, etc…). Therefore, it is really difficult to understand the process through which the conclusions have been reached.

4. Is the article well written?

The article needs substantial re-writing and, also, professional proofreading.

5. Are there portions of the article that you recommend be shortened, excised or expanded?

Yes. In details:
1) theory should be expanded;
2) the description of the case study now in the theory should be moved to a specific section;
3) a methodology section should be added;
4) discussion need substantial rework.

Review B

Review C